i dunno what it is, a hard, or strings or something in the back ground but it just dont sit write to me, sounds a bit out of place everytime they strum it, think its cause it seems to be coming across a bit dominant when it kicks in, and also the sweep before the chorus to me doesnt fit, but i like the drum pattern and the vocal over it, good work mate
Good track man, maybe take out the cowbell sound though near the end of some of the bars, oh yeah, and that sweep is a bit powerful..maybe turn it down or switch it with a reversed cymbal. Weellll done
I like this man, I think the drums could be a bit harder, well knock a bit harder..u know. The transitions are pretty smooth for what your aiming for. Id fatten the bass up...other than that...its all good
The hi hats don't really fit with me. I'd just switch the sample you are using or come up with a pattern with more swing to it. That rise is out of place a little too. The 808 vow bell could be replaced with something too.