This really isn't my style, so I can't comment on that, so I'll talk about production quality.
I don't know if you do the rap too or just the music in the back.
You need to de-ess the vocals.
The background sounds nice.
It sounds so borderline like it's gonna break, that I think you might be clipping every once in awhile. I'd turn it down just the tiniest bit.
Good track, though. A tiny bit quieter and I think production is solid.