New Video Freestyle - Wordz (prod. DRAGE TWO ONE) plus new channel LDNEXTV

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no full track for this one bro, more vids coming in june, with full tracks as well as freestyles though keep an eye out thanks for feedback
 
This sounds good and the dude's inflection is pretty cool and different. But.. I felt like I was waiting for the beat to drop harder the entire time and for the dude to start rapping faster but then it just ended. Vocals could be mixed a bit better too. They were on top of the beat. They need to be IN the beat.
Keep grindin homie.
 
The video quality was good for what it was. Its on the same lines has most hood dvds etc. So I think you've got that good. For the camera angles, add more different locations to it. Like try to switch it up for every other 4 bars just to keep the viewer more interested. I know its a freestyle and not a song, but for a song, you should incorprate that element into it next time. The beat was good, only thing i would add is one drum pattern that brings out more enegery into the track, I was waiting for it to kick up a notch and it never did, but then again maybe that was the feel you was going for.
 
hitman got it spot on about the vocal mix. good delivery / flow no wack bars. video was generic but with no real faults otherwise - the focus is on the track rather than the video. beat sounded a bit muddy could do with more time spent mixing it but was fit for the purpose. might've got a bit repetitive over 3mins~ tho. i enjoyed it.
 
dope beat, nice rapper, def will keep updated for the next vids
 
Ok bro... That's what I'm talking about, I like it alot definitely want to hear more... Keep that fire coming!
 
Video quality is nice. Lyrics are nice but you seem more fit for faster bmps.
 
i think the punchline go hard, but i feel like the delivery couldve been harder. i like his voice over the trap style beats though. But you should try changing up the scenery of the video or adding some stylish effects and making the song longer. if your goin for the based type of feel then maybe try adding a catchy hook to it as well. Overall, i see potential for greatness. :)
 
can you ellaborate bro, would appreciate it @jameritt thanks mate
 
Nice beat and the rappers pretty good too , the beat really suits the rappers style , keep it up
 
everything just seemed plain, the beat, lyrics and the video
 
ok thanks for the feedback bro, will work on that, thanks every one else commenting !
 
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