I think what you did is good, but I would like to hear some hooks somewhere in the track…you know like something that people will remember after hearing your track….Because for the length of the song, I think it's a little bit long if you don't incorporate some hooks inside and make it repeat somewhere during the track.
Other than that, your track sounds tight and clean...
Good selection of sounds used. One thing i would have done is slowly bring the kick in at the beginning (volume-wise: low to reg level db) Another note would be to cut some of the low end of the bassline and turn it up a lil. But liked it a lot, i could see this is in an ad somewhere lol
gave u a subscribe on ur utube pg