This is a really good beat. What I would recommend is having a cello in the beat so when the violins come in it's just not random. They are a little too loud as well. It's a fire beat dude though keep it up!! If you want any new tips hit me up I can show you a few things.
@3SSNX thank you for your comment !! Thank you for your proposal to help me but I'm not very good in English! I'm not sure that I will understand all your valuable advice !