I feel like this has the foundations of a nice trap beat, but the mixing is just off for me. I don't like how the kick/bass sounds with it, it sounds a bit like a blown bass drum to me. This could use some EQing and volume adjustment, maybe a high cut and a decrease on the volume of that crash as it seems to take up a lot of ear space. I do like the melodies and ambiance that you laid out however, work on cleaning this up and I think it'll sound real nice. Good job so far man, keep it up