I think you should practice chords because it really feels that you where playing off key because the melodies didn't really go together.
You need to learn some scales, search it up on youtube, theres bunch of tutorials in there.
And as far as the mix I would try giving the clap some more weight by stacking it with a heave snare or something.
I love beats with heavy drums, listen to my beat and you'll understand lol thanks
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dope beat man . diggin the structure. the claps during the verse jsut sound a tad bit weak to me. the rest of the beat is real dope man. this that ridin music. keep this up man this is real nice. i like the vibe alot
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as soon the beat dropped i was expecting something different... less dark i think, not a fan of the chords u used, gives kinda of a weird vibe, maybe u were goin for it, then its all good, but not really my cup of tea... the mix is nice tho...
keep it up mane!
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I'm not into this genre. But it's good.
I see what you were trying to pull with this beat. I dig it. Its different. I like the use of the minor 7th. Alot of producers dont expand there use of chords. They stick to the basic major/minor chords. It definitely different. I like the style. Good mix just raise the claps a little bit more. As far as who can be on this track, I really do not know because it is different and nowadays artists are opening up their selection on beats which makes it even harder to decide.
Not what i usually but its good , feel kind of trippy . Great track overall
Its all around sound I say is something maybe E40 or 2 chains. It has a nice structure and sound.
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The mix sounds good, the only thing i would suggest is turning the compression down some and/or ratio .. the 808 seems to drown out a lil.. other than that i like the melodies and sounds u used .. the beat has its own vibe to it.. great work !
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