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Intro has nice plucky sound and smooth drums, initially it's a great vibe. That swoosh needs to have it's lows cut a little bit, it seemed to eat up the other sounds. I'm a fan of that leadsynth, all though it could have been even screamier, it sounds kind of soft, and even if that's what I think you were going for, it can have a little bit more scream to it and still be quite dreamy. Also I would bring down the volume of it, the rest of the sounds are drowning behind it. Melody wise it's great, nice and clean chords, but I'm really missing out on some serious drums in this track. I hear no clap or no hi-hats or anything like it except in the intro.. This is something you should seriously consider.

Seems you got the musicality needed but with a bit of technical flaws.

Only my honest opinion. Keep at it!
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