Stranac
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made something new: https://soundcloud.com/stranac24/revenge
what do you think? leave your links and i give you feedback too!
what do you think? leave your links and i give you feedback too!
New Beat "Revenge" Online, must check! F4F
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Son USEd Joint
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Drums are cool. Nice beat to rap on
The chops are creative and nice.
I think the sample is kinda muddy.
The drum pattern is nice but i dont get why you constantly changing that snare sound every eight bars or so.
I thought you might need to build some more changeups, esp. with that drum beat.
very cool beat.
Enjoyed listening.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/another-beat-hook-||-f4f-470806/
I think the sample is kinda muddy.
The drum pattern is nice but i dont get why you constantly changing that snare sound every eight bars or so.
I thought you might need to build some more changeups, esp. with that drum beat.
very cool beat.
Enjoyed listening.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/another-beat-hook-||-f4f-470806/
Stranac
New member
what do you mean with muddy? it sounds very clean to me lol,
after 8 bars i just added a tambourine to the snare to add some variety. and for the hook i took another snare and replaced the hihats with shakers to make it sound smoother. kinda make it sound more opposite to the raw verse part.
thx for the feedback!
after 8 bars i just added a tambourine to the snare to add some variety. and for the hook i took another snare and replaced the hihats with shakers to make it sound smoother. kinda make it sound more opposite to the raw verse part.
thx for the feedback!
EarlSweatPants
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Why you arguing with the kid givin you feedback? Lolz.
He's the audience, that's the be all end all right there, regardless of the logic
of your musical decison.
And I agree, the tambourine didn't really fit, but this is still very dope.
The piano sounds a little cheesy, it doesn't mesh too well.
It might be my fatigued ears, but the drums sound a little loud. Splitting hairs with that one, tho.
Here's something I made (It's dance music, kinda):
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c-give-receive-feedback/back-some-edm-470908/
He's the audience, that's the be all end all right there, regardless of the logic
of your musical decison.
And I agree, the tambourine didn't really fit, but this is still very dope.
The piano sounds a little cheesy, it doesn't mesh too well.
It might be my fatigued ears, but the drums sound a little loud. Splitting hairs with that one, tho.
Here's something I made (It's dance music, kinda):
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c-give-receive-feedback/back-some-edm-470908/
I'mo Reign
New member
This beat is good, I like the drum pattern. Its got a nice underground feel to it.
If you got a minute checkout this House/Pop remix I did for this contest. If you like what you hear, vote for me. I'd appreciate it. All feedback welcome good or bad.
https://www.futureproducers.com/forum...25-f4f-470754/
If you got a minute checkout this House/Pop remix I did for this contest. If you like what you hear, vote for me. I'd appreciate it. All feedback welcome good or bad.
https://www.futureproducers.com/forum...25-f4f-470754/