[New Beat] Gonna Be Dropped On Valentines Day (Need Feedback)

[GoldspinkProductions]

Yoo guys, this is a slow beat im working on. im going to be dropping it on valentines day. i need your honest feedback on it so far before i can move on. thanks

https://soundcloud.com/goldspinkproductions/valentines-day-drop-intro-and

 

[JGrisly]

I mean, its kind of a skeleton at this point right?
The verse drop is cool, drums may need more of a swing to them.
It needs more rhythmic elements to really drive it home.
Def gonna need a bass as well.
The keys are good, they sound like you played them instead of "clicking" them in like alot of cats do.
Keep workin on it, itll be dope by V-day

you can feed me back right over here- https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-youre-used-ascent-f4f-come-get-work-466200/

 

[GoldspinkProductions]

I mean, its kind of a skeleton at this point right?
The verse drop is cool, drums may need more of a swing to them.
It needs more rhythmic elements to really drive it home.
Def gonna need a bass as well.
The keys are good, they sound like you played them instead of "clicking" them in like alot of cats do.
Keep workin on it, itll be dope by V-day

you can feed me back right over here- https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-youre-used-ascent-f4f-come-get-work-466200/

Yeah this is just me getting the drums sorted out, im gonna add some melody over the top to drive it home like you said, Thanks for feedback, ill do your feedback right now after i listen to your beat.