New Beat! "Gemicide"

Son, I'm bout to help you out a WHOLE bunch. The musical ideas for this beat are very clear, and very good.
Here's your problems:
1) Way the eff too much bass. That's not how you get your bass noticed, by turning it up to 11. Turn that shit down.
b) That instrument that's playing the main melody ain't the best one, choose something else
III)The bass isn't the right choice either, I don't think.

Tell me what I did wrong with my track here:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-receive-feedback/track-i-made-reason-463158/
 
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