Neo-Oldschool Style Rap Song for Critique F4F

The whole song had a good overall feeling. Kinda cool voice, pretty good voice projection and some nice flows in there too. The flow and writing could hit a bit harder! Definitely some potential here. Check out my shit https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck/r-ruggedman-ft-talik-beats-turn-up-457917/

Maybe a tip that might come in hand: Try to think about the flow even when you're not "flash-flowing" what i mean is between the flows. (if that makes sense) Like project the words between the fancy flows.. hard to explain. But that would lift the whole track up. If all parts sounded as good as the best parts.
 
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Kal X said:
I think you have decent potential. Keep working on your flows, I think your voice is more suited to a harder beat but I think this was pretty good still. The vocal mix could be a little better but that'll come in time. Also, idk what race you are but you sound pretty white and use the n word so that's kinda off putting.

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Im actually mixed race (Mediterranean and black) but I sound white because I speak properly.
 
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