Need your responsible feedback friends :-)

[Avinash The Heat]

Hi Friends, I'm Avinash from India, a rapper and make my own beats. I have been approached by a national party to make a rap promo song for their election campaign and they gave me 3 days to complete the song ( that includes beat making, recording, mixing n mastering). The rap is in tamil and I believe language is no bar in music. I want to know your feedback (both positive & negative) so that I can improve myself to compose a song under such short time. Friends, please do spend just 2 mins of your time to listen my song and give me your responsible feedback. Thanks in advance

Song: Time for Modi

Since this is my first post, am unable to post this thread with URL, so kindly copy the below URL without quotes and browse to check my song

Link: "https://soundcloud.com/gavaskarps/time-for-modi-tamil-rap-song"

 

[blackroyalty]

Hi Friends, I'm Avinash from India, a rapper and make my own beats. I have been approached by a national party to make a rap promo song for their election campaign and they gave me 3 days to complete the song ( that includes beat making, recording, mixing n mastering). The rap is in tamil and I believe language is no bar in music. I want to know your feedback (both positive & negative) so that I can improve myself to compose a song under such short time. Friends, please do spend just 2 mins of your time to listen my song and give me your responsible feedback. Thanks in advance

Song: Time for Modi

Since this is my first post, am unable to post this thread with URL, so kindly copy the below URL without quotes and browse to check my song

Link: "https://soundcloud.com/gavaskarps/time-for-modi-tamil-rap-song"

Interesting and different w/ the guitar riffs! Sounds like the reggaeton they play in my country w/ a blend of indian music w/ the flute. Nice haha

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