Need some listeners and a feedback on my mistakes.

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Edvab

Independent Producer
Hey all,

I would be really thankful if you give my track a listen and give some feedback on my mistakes. All critics ar accepted and same type of feedback guaranteered. (Ex. If you say something with two words like 'nice track', you'll receive same thing in return) Just leave your links after your comments. Thanks!

 
This put me into somewhat of a trance. I think that's a really good thing since I think you were going for a more ambient, chill kind of vibe.

The track itself was fairly "dry", as in there seemed to be a lot of unused space. I feel that with a chillout track like this, you can go a little crazy with reverb to make it more "airy". Also, I think the intro could use a little bit more to spice it up. Maybe bring in some synths a little earlier to get things going.

Anyway, you did a really good job on the mix itself. I'm listening on my headphones and everything seems to be EQ'd and panned well. And I'm relaxed after listening :p

How long have you been producing? And btw thanks for all the feedback!
 
Thank's for your review, I'll try reverbing and adding synths earlier in the beggining. Also I'd been producing for just 1,5 years, so it's not too much. I glad you like my song and I promise to upload a better version very soon!
 
Hey mate, I like your track, here's some feedback.

Your snare is pretty dry, I'd combine it with another snare and add reverb on both of them, not too much but enough to lift it up a little bit. The tracks also pretty long, unless you've been going a while long tracks can be dangerous, I'd try cutting it down to 5 minutes or so. Other than that it's a nice track :)

My track is in the sig, please have a listen and see what you think :)
 
Thank's for a feedback! I already listened to your song (comment about the date and stuff :D). And one more thing - there are no snares in this song :p
 
Dude! i love the 2:30 part!!! such good vibes! And the other parts of the song kind of have a disco feel. Nice thick bass. If this was sped up to 140 it could be like some uplifting trance!
 
Yeah, I though it's a progressive house with some influences from deep house and trance. Glad you love it!
 
Pagetrance said:
Definately a very uplifting sounding track, I liked it!

https://soundcloud.com/pagetrance/july15
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Hey Pagetrance,

yeah, it's supposed to be that way. I had a listen of your 'July15' track and what I came up to, that you should try panning those two synths. There's alot of space to use and when the two collide, I can hear a small clash between them for the title of a leading melody. Otherwise, melodies are good and you could end up with a very good track if you want. :)
 
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