Need some feedback on my new song.

[AidanjKeenan]

Hello! Wrote another song and would love some feedback from some fellow metalheads! right now there are only 2 guitars in the recording, no drums, bass, or vocals yet, but once I finished the amount of songs I want, they will be added.

Please leave comments or suggestions, thought this song was pretty solid!

https://soundcloud.com/aidanjkeenan1991/song-3

Thanks everyone.

 

[XmarXtheSpt]

Sounds good so far, It's kind hard to hear everything. What are you using to record? Straight from the mic?

 

[BotSaw]

The ideas are good although its hard to hear every detail

 

[Johnny Lewis]

The riffs sound pretty good, though I'd lower the gain a little bit.