If I critiqued it myself, I'd say perhaps the volume on the vocals are too low. The articulation could of been better. Let me know what you think and I'll exchange feedback
good energy and production value. you gotta work on your flow a little more though. Id suggest paying more attention to syllable use.
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I feel like you listened to Linkin Park growing up. I agree that the articulation could have been a bit better. The female vocals sound good. This is a dark song for a specific feeling. Overall, it's a good job.