I commented on your previous version also and I kinda remember that version.
Starting off: Good thing you found out how to route your output audio to make a decent recording
I like what you did with the beat. You added some piano elements if I'm not mistaking.
A "stop" to break the repetition of your beat, which could use a more complex (not necessarily more complex, but better) drumroll.
I can't help but miss one element in this version that you had in your previous version, it sounded like an upcoming bass which gradually increased in volume, which set a cool vibe imo.
Also, be carefull with the dB levels of the elements in your track. The kick you have seems to be clipping (which means it's too loud, thus it's cutting off the sound causing a crackling sound).
Keep it coming, you got a decent base for a good track. I'm curious to see your next versions