I think the beat/song started out good but when the drums came in, I wasn't feelin it as much. Also, the vocals sound too powerful and sound like they need to be cleaned up more and polished. I would focus on that choir part more that's in the beginning and then slowly built up from that and then drop some hard hitting kicks and snares. Shit would be dope lol but it's your track so do what you want, jus keep working at it bro, it's got potential.