It's good for an unmastered track. Work a little with the drum kicks. I think it would sound much better with a reverb. And yea, as Aviral said, add some sound effects. I think gunshot effects would work well with this.
kind of a dub-hop feel to it. I like it, but I have to agree with some of the earlier posts. It definitely needs some effects to make it pop and stand out. It's unique, keep up the good work.
