Lui-V - "6 Feet Down" F4F

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My names Lui-V, im a rapper/producer/engineer from the San Fernando Valley, jus north of L.A. I got this new song out called "6 Feet Down" featuring a couple other dope local rappers. Check it out..


"6 Feet Down (feat. Nuklehead & JYLN JML)


I'll return any n all feedback

Follow me on Twitter n I'll follow back: https://twitter.com/_LUI_V_
 
Jesus man, youre on fire with this track, only :50 seconds in and im picking my jaw up off the floor.

this is what the game needs, emotion, people who actually put their balls behind their bars. This track is heavy man
 
khemist514 said:
Jesus man, youre on fire with this track, only :50 seconds in and im picking my jaw up off the floor.

this is what the game needs, emotion, people who actually put their balls behind their bars. This track is heavy man
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thanks man! It really means a lot to me. n yea I try to put in as much heart as I can whenever I deliver a verse
 
Lito313 said:
love the track. productions is killer, thats no question. Flow is nice! i feel like the vocal recording can be better, doesnt match the quality of the beat. experiment with layering. it just sounds a bit thin to me. but im lovin the track. keep it up!

check out my track https://www.futureproducers.com/for...usic-give-receive-feedback/magic-step-476173/
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thanks for taking the time to listen! I def feel you on the vocal recording, we recorded this at my house on a little AKG perception 120. I usually go to a studio and record with a u87, but we figured we would just record at my house since it's not going on any album or anything. but yea, it does sound thin, I was having sum trouble mixing the vocals.

I jus checked out ur beat and im ****in wit it heavy bro, I love the 80's vibe
 
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Olie said:
The main female vocal sample seems a little thin. The first rappers flow is pretty good, the pronunciation falls off a little bit on some words. The chorus is ok but too repetitive for me. The second rappers tonality is cool. His flows a bit dodgy but his pronunciation is better than the first. The beat was pretty cool overall. Keep up the good work.

Spread the love :)
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-receive-feedback/warped-476191/#post49791084
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thanks man I really appreciate the indepth feedback, shit like that is the most helpful. pronunciation and flow is definitely we try to work on and improve on everyday.
 
Psalm said:
Flows are dope and so is the beat, it's got my head nodding! I don't like the hook though here man, the "6 feet down" part gets a bit too repetitive for me after the fourth time, it's good how it changes in the 8th line though. The beat change up at 3.17 is perfect too.
Let me know what you think of my beat: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...eird-chill-beat-all-feedback-returned-476288/
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yea looking back I could see why u would feel that way about the hook. this was definitely one of my more "unconventional hooks" I guess lol. thanks for listening man, I replied to ur thread
 
TaylorMace said:
hey bro you go hard on this beat no lie - listening to it i feel your emotions my dude and i hear bait of kendrick in your style (you a fan of his) ? feel free to follow back on soundcloud we should definitely stay in touch

drop some feed back on my track too : https://soundcloud.com/iamtaylormace/out-west
Taylor Mace
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good looks! im not gonna front like im a big kendrick fan but i **** wit him, section 80 was my shit for a cool minute lol.

I really liked ur song, the production is amazing and u got a pretty cool voice
 
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