lil' verse

  • Thread starter Thread starter *Blazin_Gal*
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Nah...don't get it twisted!!!

i thought Stop was a fella and then started all this "blazin sq" sexual fantasy sh1t.

So.....


Are you a girl or do you have a little suga in your coffee???

P.s

I'd rather pull my own dik than look for e-love
 
flareward said:
Stop Rushing,

Are you female??..i just need to know.
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feel free to lauch your own investigation.




oh and btw. carnage didnt do it.

plead the shaggy!! "wasn't me"
 
flareward said:
Stop Rushing,

Are you female??..i just need to know.
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Damn I always thought SR was male..... eh ufck it I really dont care........... Yall too crazy
 
I guess since you said it was your first time it isn't bad, but try to refrain from use rhymes that are expected, like nice=ice, it's too typical and easy, and try not to write in such a poetry form it can get boring because when I first started back in 6th grade that's how I wrote and it sounded too repetitive.
 
*looks at groin*

I dont know what the f*ck is goin on down here.

*looks again*

Smells real bad so my eyes are waterin but I think I can see my 'woo-hah'. Which would probably make me male.
 
SR thats a pretty original idea under you sig! i wish i thought a that.
 
originally posted by StopRushing
*looks at groin*

I dont know what the f*ck is goin on down here.

*looks again*

Smells real bad so my eyes are waterin but I think I can see my 'woo-hah'. Which would probably make me male. [/QUOTE]



(j-traxx throws stoprushing a bar of lever 2000 "for all of your 2000 parts" and proceeds to ; with a brotherly love, kick him off the top of victoria falls to ensure a good cleansing.) pimpin aint easy. but you gotta be clean. now throw on ya fp.com gear and lets proceed to pimp these suburban packpackas !!
 
ok then, thanks for your advice.


illicit_records said:
I guess since you said it was your first time it isn't bad, but try to refrain from use rhymes that are expected, like nice=ice, it's too typical and easy, and try not to write in such a poetry form it can get boring because when I first started back in 6th grade that's how I wrote and it sounded too repetitive.
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j-traxx said:
(j-traxx throws stoprushing a bar of lever 2000 "for all of your 2000 parts" and proceeds to ; with a brotherly love, kick him off the top of victoria falls to ensure a good cleansing.) pimpin aint easy. but you gotta be clean. now throw on ya fp.com gear and lets proceed to pimp these suburban packpackas !!
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Brotherly Love? You broke like 6 of my ribs with that double-footed jumping dropkick.
 
Did blazing squad really say they thought their version was better than the bone's?

in retropsepct though i gotta say to them it probably is because they are wack ass little **** eaters who lack any form of skill whatsoever. B.Gal your lyrics are wack!!!!!!!!!!!! that doesn't mean you will be wack forever but it depends what you are aiming to do, if like i think you wanna spit **** like those little 'gangsta' kiddies then you already there AND you are posting on the wrong site, asking for critique from the wrong people and also are a moron but that can't be helped. So my advice to you is if blkazin squad are your inspiration then sit home and write your little...um (what the **** is it anyway?) sit home and write that drivle and count the days until you mature into a woman and grow out of it! But if you don't wanna do that and actua\lly wanna elevate as a real mc - which i think you don't you just dillusional - then read other posts, look around forums and pick up on what other people are doing, yeah you can think of five words to rhyme with ice and you really wanna get off your chest how cold you are (homework gettin you down?) but who can't. get an idea of what good is then don't post until you really feel you are some way along to achievin better things.
peace
 
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