Thanks for the feedback, it was useful and detailed! Much appreciated
Intro (0 - 0:32)
I like the intro melodically, the only thing I would change is to use less crashes (or cymbals?). For example, there's one at 0:10 but then there's no further instrumentation or switch-up. As a listener, I was expecting some bass or something to enter after the cymbal.
Verse/chorus (0:32 - 1:02, 1:22 - 2:06)
This part works well, there's a buildup with higher pitched notes as the verse progresses, moving the song forward and building tension. I would probably change up the drums a bit between the first and second chorus since they seemed pretty similar. Maybe add some hi-hats?
Prechorus (1:02 - 1:22)
Nothing to add here, it worked well and helped to introduce the next part.
Bridge (2:06 - 2:37)
I liked this part a lot. It was different from the prechorus (heard some other melody being played?) and not just a copy.
Outro (2:37-)
My favorite part of the song. I think the stripped down instrumentation worked better, with less going on in the drum section.