Mix needs some work and i think the pitch is a little to low for my taste but it sounds alright, Keep working at it, the drums should hit alot harder, boost the snare around 220hz and like 6khz, or cut by that much and compress it for a cleaner mix. And you should automate a lo-pass filter cutoff for both the sample and drums. and mess with it from time to time. What software do you use?
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