This is nice bro sounds really epic and menacing but I do think the kick and bass are way too distorted they kinda ruin the epic vibe of the beat because imo the distortion is not the nice sounding distortion I would personally apply a subtle amount of distortion to the low end so you can hear and feel it but its not slapping you in the face and sounding overally distorted but thats my only criticisms the rest is very well done.
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There is alot of energy in this beat, and you have some nice melodic instrumentation going on. other than that though, the 808 is bad. It's the wrong note when it comes up, i dont know what the right note is but it's not that one. i will say the reverse effect in the middle of the track was fire haha. drums are good but not especially interesting or anything. good track. keep it up!
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Amazing work,super bass, right amount of distortion,love the melody,You've got lot of variation,very good beat.
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the main melody and drums sound super clean, but the 808 sounds a bit too over distorted and out of key. this beat might have worked a little better with the 808 playing a constistent melody with some pitch bends. other than that i think the track sounds lit!
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Definitely need to fix the distortion in the low end. Try using a multi-band EQ to take off the sound below 40 Hz or so. Otherwise very icy.