Kid's Commercial Jingle [FEEDBACK FOR FEEDBACK]
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BlackJIM
@Bizzytits
sounds smooth, i like how the drums ease in, steezy
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...edback/first-music-video-new-song-f4f-459971/
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...edback/first-music-video-new-song-f4f-459971/
DeadAsDisco
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i like that second one alot man, the melody and structure sounds pretty good to me man sounds like a 90s rave beat. keep workin
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Fremen
Nice job on this, Trump. Definitely sounds like something that could be licensed. Although I don't see it as much for children as I do for maybe teenagers. It feels a little more sophisticated/modern than some of the bells-musicbox-cutesy stuff I hear on a lot of kids commercials.
It's also very motivational. Corporate promo vids use tracks like this.
One more comment... Keep your runtime in mind - think commercials (usually :15, :30, :60 long). Your drums don't hit until :50, and the full instrument mix (best part!) doesn't happen until 1:41. You might think about shortening the intro, and getting the full mix (call it the 'chorus') in as soon as possible. THEN, come out of that with a stripped-down verse part or something, before going back into a full chorus and your ending. Just my 2 cents though, speaking from what music supes have told me in the past.
It's also very motivational. Corporate promo vids use tracks like this.
One more comment... Keep your runtime in mind - think commercials (usually :15, :30, :60 long). Your drums don't hit until :50, and the full instrument mix (best part!) doesn't happen until 1:41. You might think about shortening the intro, and getting the full mix (call it the 'chorus') in as soon as possible. THEN, come out of that with a stripped-down verse part or something, before going back into a full chorus and your ending. Just my 2 cents though, speaking from what music supes have told me in the past.