beat has potential bro i can hear it but needs some work really.
we wont talk about the mix as you already mentioned its un mixed BUT
the melody line imo is nice however change the intrument used.. those bells (i think its bells) become really annoying, maybe use a house / dance pluck or a square sine but played really high gives you a nice sound..
the "hey hey" vocal chants.. remove them or make them really low cause they become annoying.. i would remove them and find something else to replace.. any other sound would do something weird.
the idea is there bro, just work on a few things
Check mine out when you get a chance. Would be great to get feedback on all 3 but if you haven’t got the time choose anyone you wish. Thanks
[Deep Thoughts] - All original, no samples, pop / R&B type
Vocal chants need to go our be switched to something a little less played out.
The percs/bells and the darkness of the beat I'm feeling. Even the bass.
Feel the mix could use some work and possibly some better transitions and other elements could be fused into this beat.
Overall its a good start. Keep it up.
The way it's slightly off-key is really effective - dark and a bit menacing. The vox chanting could be used with a little less prevalence as they 'rigidise' the progress a bit too much - although I think I understand the concept - the voice impelling that the listener 'keep moving'
ya man like others have said try switching it up a little bit...change up drums..and ya the chants need to be different or less frequent..but you do have a solid foundation..just try to be different ...check me out Once Again Its ON and Poppin FEED 4 FEED like ALWAYS
First I thank you all, for the usefull feedback from all of you, i'm working on it, i'm about to get izotope ozone 5 for mixing and mastering so i hope it will come out hard!
i'm going to take my time for this beat, i'll give this an update soon!!
really appreciated
WEll what i would change for this track is bass in my opinion its too darky and you dont need saw here. I would use use lighter bass with some horns maybe it would sound like a gangsta hiphop track i guess. But well this is my opinion of this track otherwise this is your idea, your track maybe you wanted exactly that bass so then its ok. This is just mine opinion : ) ALso check out mine https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-feedback/my-track-demo-electro-house-461657/