Dope track bro. Smooth and vibey and the drums hit hard too. Overall well produced, however i feel the mix sounds a bit chaotic when all the elements are playing. I feel the kick is slightly overpowering too, other than that I like it!
I like the string elements and when you brought the snare in. I believe some mixing good panning, intro, verse and chorus arranging you'll be good to go. Try not to bring the sounds in all at once because it can become overwhelming to the ear. Gradually. Great job!