Jay Z. The City Is Mine. Remix by Vic Velour.
- Thread starter Vic Velour
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Good stuff. The vocal quality doesn't sound that great on this and could maybe be turned down a little. But i'm feeling it, nice job.
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micasaweapon
J-RoD
hey this is pretty decent. however, i feel that the vocals aren't really mixed well in the beat. i also feel as tho something is missing. the melody is great tho and the instrumentation sounds nice
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Verace
New member
Hey cool stuff man.
I have some things to say though.... I feel the intro is a bit too long. Drop straight into the beat quick... no need for that much.
Beat could have more punch to it, id look for another one or try a transmod or the classic compression techs. The snare feels a bit flabby, and the kick could have a bit more twack to it. Layer it with another one if needed.
The sound of the groovy keys could be little more refined too.
Keep diggin
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I have some things to say though.... I feel the intro is a bit too long. Drop straight into the beat quick... no need for that much.
Beat could have more punch to it, id look for another one or try a transmod or the classic compression techs. The snare feels a bit flabby, and the kick could have a bit more twack to it. Layer it with another one if needed.
The sound of the groovy keys could be little more refined too.
Keep diggin
Check me out if you'd like. Its eletronic music tho. Drop some feedback here too: VERACE - GANG$TAS
slim...
New member
man, its kinda nice...
the hats sound a bit harsh, the vocals dont really match the beat, sounds kinda off to me... it need a better mix, but i get the idea and its good, i like the piano... but the drums dont really kick, its mad thin, some compression will do wonders to it..
keep it up man
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the hats sound a bit harsh, the vocals dont really match the beat, sounds kinda off to me... it need a better mix, but i get the idea and its good, i like the piano... but the drums dont really kick, its mad thin, some compression will do wonders to it..
keep it up man
peace!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ve-feedback/spell-me-so-soulful-[f4f]-472031/