J Dilla Inspired Track (F4F!)

[YWM]

Hey guys, was listening to some J dilla and got inspired to make a beat. I appreciate any feedback to improve on this beat and will return the feed when i get the time to.

heres what i came up with:
Old School J Dilla Type Beat/Instrumental- Miami Nights (Prod.YWM) - YouTube
https://soundcloud.com/ywmbeats

thanks guys

 

[BroHammadAli]

Love that chord progression. You've got the old school hip hop feel down packed. The mix on the drums is a little bright to me. Maybe more subtle drums? Thats my one and only critique, every thing else I enjoyed.

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[West One]

this is nice man, love the old school vibe. i like way the drums sound, maybe turn up the sample a bit? maybe not sounds good to me.

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[Codex]

Nice one. Like the old school feel. i agree the sample could be a bit louder. Good work anyways.

 

[YWM]

Which part do you mean ? I made this from scratch didn't use samples . Thanks for the feed will return it when I get home

 

[EastCash]

This is mad nice. I like the snare, real punchy. Samples tight real smooth. I like really like this!!

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[Kitecabrinha]

Siiiiiick mellow beat! Love the ride and warm chords. Def made me sink back into the couch and float away. Left a sound cloud comment. Keep it up!

 

[deadxbeat]

this is dope man! i really like the mellow vibe it gives me while listening to it. only thing i would say needs a little editing is the drums. For a sample like this, the drums would sound amazing with it being more subtle and lofi

https://soundcloud.com/deadxbeat

 

[iamslowpoke]

just went through your whole soundcloud and your work is tight as hell.

 

[YWM]

thanks for the feed guys . will look through editing the drums

 

[Yuuokae]

Whoa this is tremendous. I'm stuck in my seat. Its awfully mellow and bluesy with a jazzy horn. Man, I really adore this. The bass just dances and sparkles the music with grit. This is what cold is if nobody ever told you.

 

[Beats by Jackie]

This is really ILL. Reminds me a bit of Slakah's stuff. I love the extra snare hits!

 

[Smashmello]

Not my tasty of beats, but production wise it seems really well made. the chords are really interesting. I also agree with the others on the drum thing.

 

[Buzzzzzzzzz]

that was real good... i just thought the bassline coulda been better but the overall feel was ill

 

[YWM]

thanks for the feed. yes will consider redoign the bassline

 

[SwagProductionz]

i think the drums maybe off.. but i feel this.. i like the vibe off it.. keep it up

 

[Brainchildren]

This is a great beat. Really mellow, great for just cruising too. I think maybe the drums are a little too loud, but other than that, perfection. Check out my song: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...deo-game-type-beat-f4f-100%-guarantee-470196/

 

[kfxkicks]

Cool sample. I would like to feel more of that low end.
Get a few more percussion elements in there to vary up the drums.
Kick / Snare work but could be better as well.
Think it needs another sample or something layered in there so it feels less empty. Though you could just double up the samples.
Its smooth and chill for sure but its not really keeping my attention.
Keep it up

KFX

 

[dylan_wtf]

this is real chill, the drums are dope man. solid job overall

 

[YOUnity]

dope! the drums sound just like Dillas and I love the hihat work