I'm close to finishing my first Project.... looking for tips plz!

[Flip G]

Just thought it would be cool to update the concept...

let me know if it turned out how I pictured it in my head...
FEEL FREE TO BE BRUTAL.... lol! it's all fun

 

[K-Bex Beats]

Yo dude, these are pretty tight, my main feedback would be to add either backing singers on the hooks and adlibs in the verses. Will help to fill out the vibe a lot. Keep up the grind