i neeed a feedback and an honest opinion

[Dzack_beats]

Hi wassup guys ..... a young producer tryin to make it ...so i need you ....i can't do it without you guys
https://soundcloud.com/z-ck-c-mpton/we-are-the-light-just-love
.... give me feedbacks .... you can follow ; suscribe ; like ; share ; comment ... what ever ..... just love music maaan

thanks

 

[Dzack_beats]

anyone ???

 

[ThyHoneynut]

Hey brentedgell here. Just so you know, the admins are really anal about "bumping" which you may not know about like i didn't so that's why I'm saying this. Admins will send you an *******-ish message about bumping your thread, which means you're commenting on your own thread to get it back to the top. Even though I know you're not trying to do that, you just want people to comment on it. But I'm just telling you

 

[Dzack_beats]

no i'm not trying to do that .... i'm a new user ... i don"t know the conditions

 

[Mentalattica]

Not bad at all. You have a good foundation to work with here in my opinion. I'd like to hear some more percussion or stabs here and there? Seems a little empty at times. I like the concept though!

Just my opinion FWIW.

 

[Dzack_beats]

thanks for your comment .... i agree with you a lil bit .... cause if i added more precs ... i'll maybe loose the sample .... so i just made it like a slow jam type or a chillout beat