I need feedback on my R&B track

[ThisIsMyProductions]

Hey guys, I need feedback on this. I dont know how to mix or play the piano. I started about a year ago. I dont know what else to fix. Need your help.

https://soundcloud.com/loklyfatty30x/ever-since-prod-by-1

 

[One Stop Hip Hop]

this is really nice bro! I love the sounds and melodies you use homie! the drums are banging too!

 

[ThisIsMyProductions]

this is really nice bro! I love the sounds and melodies you use homie! the drums are banging too!

Oh maan, thaaanks. I appreciate it. I been loving your beats too. Maybe we should collab. Thanks bro.

 

[mynameissid]

This sounds great man!

I like the part where your high-hats come in at 1:07. What software do you produce on and where did you get all these cool instruments from?

 

[ThisIsMyProductions]

This sounds great man!

I like the part where your high-hats come in at 1:07. What software do you produce on and where did you get all these cool instruments from?

thaanks bro. I use Fl Studios, and for the sounds, I just used effects and EQ'd everything.

 

[plotwist90]

Melody is decent, drums are nice in this too. No technical complaints I would just add in more elements to really set it apart. My only knitpicky thing is that some of the synths that come in later sound a bit dry and stock. Still a nice beat, maybe invest in some VSTs? The arrangement and everything is on point.\

https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../f4f-sampled-horn-banger-464031/#post49730398

 

[Logos]

love the kick/bass....i feel like something should be diff about the hats, not crazy about them...I like the pattern but maybe they are too harsh for my taste orshould be pushed back some....

really good work overall though...the chorus is right

https://soundcloud.com/potlatchprod/kelli-leigh-never-change/s-xdK10

 

[ChaChaBeats]

I'm feeling the melodies. The Synth with the melody could be a different/better one. LIke homie said above just upgrade your synth VST's. But don't get it twisted, your melodies and arrangements is on point. I even like the way you panned the open hi hats. Keep grinding! Here's my link:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...er-deep-house-r-b-track-feel-vibe-f4f-463969/

 

[iSanchez]

Give the Song a little bit dirt, some Compression on the Drums or High-Cut the Synth with the melody. Nothin more to critisize... Nice Beat an vybe.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ck/*miami-vice*-prod-igor-sanchez-f4f-464075/

 

[ThisIsMyProductions]

Thanks guys, ill get back to yall with yo links. Without this feedback, i wouldnt know what to work on in the future.

 

[Donta Black]

Has a nice vibe to it, at first I was feeling the intro a lil but after the drop, I was sure I like this beat, I feel the pad is off keey on one note, but other than that this is nice. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-100%-feedback-returned-464340/#post49731900