I blame you - deep house

[totta]

hey, new track from me. Would appreciate feedback if anyone has any. Thinking that the pad might be a bit sci-fi, and track gets a bit repetitive after the main drop. what do you think?


https://soundcloud.com/jamestottakai/iblameyou-15/s-rkb4x

cheers

 

[Ely Hess]

I'de agree with you on what you said, maybe introducing some more bass elements or something?

 

[Vincit]

I would use more rhytmic variationts... but it's great... keep going

 

[yaniv169]

Nice work...although your bass is too massive I i cant hear all the good stuff that behind

 

[totta]

hey, thanks for all the responses, ive made a new version now: mixed it up a bit, added in a new piano hook, lowered the bass and added some other variations. I think its sounding much better now, what do you guys think? is there anything sticking out as lower quality than the rest?

https://soundcloud.com/jamestottakai/iblameyou-36/s-rGqUV

 

[totta]

sorry, use this one

https://soundcloud.com/jamestottakai/iblameyou-38/s-GzVi3

 

[fidelrtorres]

Hey im hearing the last version. Really nice, maybe the first drop you could build more tension around it, drum work is tight, that kick is phat, baseline is really cool, piano is really nice, Glide lead fits really well, an vocals too. Mix is really tight, maybe too much power on the mid-low, it could be really nice if the song could get more hi-end. Overall a really good song, Groovy . Keep working

Cheers.

 

[Clexxx]

is the track still online? link is broken

 

[totta]

yep, sorry i reposted it above after i made the changes. Use this one instead

https://soundcloud.com/jamestottakai...you-38/s-GzVi3

 

[Bronz]

Great track man! You've got the groove I'm new to the producing scene so I can't give you professional feedbacks. I think it lacked abit of tension before the drops like fidelrtorres said, well that doesn't change the fact that it was a great listen, I liked the vocals aswell keep it up!

 

[totta]

thanks for the feedback, guys. Ive gone back now and added in some build up for the two drops now, and increased the top end a bit to add some clarity to the hats etc. Think im just about finished now with the layout, time to move on to the mastering!

https://soundcloud.com/jamestottakai/iblameyou-42/s-Wr9Ae