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[lassberg]

Hi,

I want to introduce me. My name is Lasse. I am from Hamburg in Germany.
I would be happy about constructive feedback for a beat.

The beat you can find on
https://soundcloud.com/sionbryson/i-feel-nothing

Thanks!
Lasse

 

[Donta Black]

Ok, this has potential, I would lose what sounds like faint small string stabs, and the cheesy tenor sax sound, honestly, you got some potential bro, I would invest in some better sounds, i think thats the element at this point that is crippling your sound, get some better sounds and work on learning some simple chords than some chord progressions than you should be good money, nothings comes overnight, you'll get there! Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...o-100%-feedback-returned-473571/#post49778251

 

[lassberg]

Thank you for your extensive feedback, Donta Black!

 

[Tomer Caspi]

Nice Beat good mix I personally don't like the bass sound try to use more pluck sounds with delay I think it will improve the sound
Sorry for bad English

 

[virginiaslim]

It's bland, it doesn't pop to me. As an artist I wouldn't be able to find a flow. I feel the verses don't stand out from the hook area, so I wouldn't know where to jump in and out at.You need some breaks so that it has potential to actually become a song.

 

[dichotomos]

The sounds need to be complamentary but different also. there are a lot of similar sounding sounds in this beat. You need new sounds. Try using samples.

Also try having different sections, my ears only heard 1 bassline and beat through the entire beat.

You did have good reverb on the snare. Take out the Sax.



Feedback plz
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...hip-hop-type-beat-feedback-4-feedback-473631/

 

[Redux]

Like some other people said your choice of sounds were a bit off, there was definitely something there though. I think there were the elements of a solid track there for sure, just a matter of working it out.
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