how good is this, what needs improvement etc

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l3lackjax

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you cant rock the mic like this,
quit lyin to yaselves, you aint artists,
your shits' all crap, & you call that rap?
muh****a imma 'bout ta snap
cuzza the skill they so clearly lack
half of these rappers is wack man
s'why i attack them
 
At the end your reaching to keely ryhming, don't.

its pretty good, just work on switching up your ryhme scheme and returning to it for a punchy feel.
 
OmegaFlame said:
You should check out this course even though it's finishing up you go and download the videos before it closes. I think it would help you out alot. https://class.coursera.org/songwriting-006
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These are very! veryy!!! interesting videos. Highly recommend them to anyone trying to learn about song writing, he explains it well! Thanks man

& about the 'keely' rhyming, what do you mean? The way I bend the rhyme? When your actually rapping it aloud you have to take into account how its going to sound when you bend it, and as long as I can do that I dont understand what the issue is? Or am I just getting stuck on the same rhyme sound, and it gets repetitive? Not sure.
 
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