Not bad for a beginner's trap beat. To improve drastically, try using better bass and drums, and EQ them for more of a knock. Also, try more transitions to keep beat interesting. Keep it up man!
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were you talking about the beat in the first post or the one I had with EQ'd kicks and 808s that I posted on this page?
Your beat sounded real good it reminded me of a Kid Cudi beat. I don't really have much to say for improving it though bc I don't make beats that style.