dont really care for the trance synths, but i thought the track had interesting arrangement. im not sure what feel you were going for, but the trance feel clashes with the edgy/clubby vibe in a way that takes away from the overall vibe, if that makes sense.
- I think the trance synths are cool
- The arrangement is on point
- I would layer a snare overtop of the clap for the hook section or soemthing
- I think the clap and some of the instruments have too much reverb
- The kick could go harder -- it needs to knock!
- I think if you improved the mix, the joint would be raised another level
First of all, your vocal tag at the start was epic, haha. It got me good.
Drums need to be much harder hitting in my opinion. Your kick is too soft, shit needs to BANG. Could double it up with a slow 808 Sub maybe that'll do the job.
and/or it just sounds like it needs the simplest two note deep bassline.