Hi guys,
Here is a track I did yesterday,
it's kind of 80's electronic music style (I am not sure how to call that )
I was hoping to get some criticism from you guys here.
I will be happy to return your feedbacks as soon as possible.
goodflo
try to make a build up in the track so there is a qlimax…. now its al the same to me
Yeah, thank you much Ryan!Really, really dope. It reminds me of some MNEK or SBTRKT with Sampha on the vocals, if you've ever heard of those artists. I truly love this type music and I think you did it justice. The synthy bass you had in here was nice in my opinion, but I think you could automate the organ-esque synth in here. It sounds a little too campy in my opinion, kinda like Michael Jackson's "Thriller" but in kind of a distracting way. Other than that though, it's a dope, dope song.
I like this man. My girlfriend who is listening also approves! The only critisism I have is that you should maybe get some modulation on some of the synths. Whether that's a phaser, chorus ect is up to you but it's a bit drone like. You could maybe just mess with the equalization a little. Just a little thing but I think it would add to the track!
Not too into this genre of music myself but vocally put a little more oomph into it, with all the sidechaining going on the vocal work doesn't quite get on par with the instrumental. Everything else sounds pretty good though, mixing is nice!
Good job dude.
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