First time cleaning vocals aka constructive criticism appreciated

[ugly gooseling]

Was my first time giving this sort of thing a shot and would appreciate any criticism and advice from more experienced noodlers



thx in advance

 

[Cerberux]

The vocal sounds slightly muddy, I'd EQ that a bit to clean it up. Try to experiment by cutting some of the lower mid fequencies, or boosting (SLIGHTLY) the higher frequencies. Also the vocal falls behind that bass in some parts, maybe drop that bass down a tiny bit so the vocals sit properly, because it sits fine with everything else, the bass is too loud though in my opinion. Hope this helps!