First Mix - some feedback appreciated

[Stevo_1972]

Hey Guys,

I'm a complete noob to this forum and to producing and creating edm, but as I've been a big fan of trance since the early days, I thought it was time to have a go at creating something myself. I've really struggled to find a good balance of the sounds and while I'm still not totally happy with this (I think maybe the kick sounds a bit weedy now ), I've reached a point where some constructive criticism and guidance would be welcome.

Can anyone recommend any good online courses for mastering and mixing? - seems to be a few out there, but not sure where my money is best placed...

View attachment Ascendance.mp3

Thanks in advance!

 

[Gre!g]

hey bro im new to producing also started in jun 2014... from what i've learned so far ... i think you should kinda intrduce new elements it sounds a bit repetitive... but good melody bro .. keep it up
would u mind giving a critque of my track too... or one more thing use a music sharing service like soundcloud etc etc instead of postin mp3 directly ..would save the download time...

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/edm-electronica-ambient-trance-house-dance/cazette-sleepless-remix-gre-g-2-7-remix-481919/#post49819782

 

[Stevo_1972]

Thanks for the feedback! I think I've been so hung up on making everything 'fit' I forgot about song fatigue. There is definitely something of a learning curve and guess it will take a few different mixes before I can produce something club ready.