skinnyknicca646
S.O. Terik
Looking for feedback on new beat made, all criticism is welcomed.
SoundClick artist: S.O. Terik - page with MP3 music downloads
SoundClick artist: S.O. Terik - page with MP3 music downloads
F4F "This N*** Here"
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BayaniMusic
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Do you use FL studio? I'd definitely hop on this beat if I was a rapper. Love the drums bro it's smackin. The only down side is that it kinda sound like many folks out there. But I like the touch with the natural strings.
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skinnyknicca646
S.O. Terik
appreciate the feedback, I do use FL Studio, once I get off work I'll check your music
Sound's great, but I would lower the 4 keyboard thingy. It do sound good, but it has a tiny too much volume making it sound as it's in a layer of it's own, if you know what I mean. Also the drop feels a bit offbeat, or is it just me? Just need a bit tightening, that's all.
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Donta Black
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I like everything in this composition except the sub, everythign else is official to me, I even like that small tom element, overall, this is dope. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../ngfl-nice-guys-finish-last-5-12-14-a-476437/
skinnyknicca646
S.O. Terik
appreciate the feedback
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Eternity
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Lots of things to like here... that kick is nice... matter of fact, the whole mix is nice. Sub hits hard & clean. I like the toms, they're nicely done. I like the little glitches and pitch bends that happen now & again too. I like the string/pad that comes in during what I think is the hook section, it gives a uniqueness to the track. But it makes me wonder what type of track you envision on this beat? It seems to oscillate between having a dark sound and a brighter sound when the chorus comes in. I like the Lil Jon synth that comes in during the 3rd verse.
Here are my critiques...I would switch out 3 sounds. #1 the "ay" female voice sample--its been used to death. create a new one. #2 the falling synth sound effect that comes in at the end of the loop every once in a while. it's also a generic/frequently used sound. again, I say create a new sound to fill that space. and #3 the 'rising filter sweep/synth' that comes in before the chorus and in several other parts. I don't know if it was drummer boi or someone else who made this popular, but it makes the beat sound generic.
I think if you swapped out those 3 sounds with original sounds you created (and that no one else has or uses) this beat steps up to a new level. Everything else is on point...very crisp mix, nice arrangement, nice blend of familiar instrumentation with a new added element (the string/synth sound I mentioned above)... just my 2 !
Here are my critiques...I would switch out 3 sounds. #1 the "ay" female voice sample--its been used to death. create a new one. #2 the falling synth sound effect that comes in at the end of the loop every once in a while. it's also a generic/frequently used sound. again, I say create a new sound to fill that space. and #3 the 'rising filter sweep/synth' that comes in before the chorus and in several other parts. I don't know if it was drummer boi or someone else who made this popular, but it makes the beat sound generic.
I think if you swapped out those 3 sounds with original sounds you created (and that no one else has or uses) this beat steps up to a new level. Everything else is on point...very crisp mix, nice arrangement, nice blend of familiar instrumentation with a new added element (the string/synth sound I mentioned above)... just my 2 !
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