First of all, the animation is really dope. I liked the kick pattern, but the sample you chose is too raw in my opinion. The mix as whole sounds clean and pleasant when listening.
I personally would think about adding some lead / (supersaw) synth to make the track more massive, but it might be more a personal taste. Besides, from 2:44 the sound is not playing anymore.
If you could check my tracks (see my signature) and let me know as well what do you think, I would appreciate that a lot.