*F4F* CHill Beats needing some Constructive Criticism!!

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C_TH3_TRUTH

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I've got boat loads of beats, but I wanna know what I need to fine tune/fix before I flood my Soundcloud. Any kind of feedback is appreciated. Plz be detailed ex. Too much bass, I hear clipping, to repetitive, ETC.. Be honest, if It's garbage don'y just say it suck tell me why it Sucks a$$ lol. If you like I will plz follow as I will do the same& who knows I might even repost something of urs. If you'd like some feedback leave me a link to ur craft, but the best way is to leave your SoundCloud I'm on there 24/7.
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well they aren't bad, just a bit dry.

-The drums are kinda dull. The kick and snare could use more of a punch.
-The melodies are good, but they seem really simple. adding just one or two more intruments to give it a more fuller sound would be my suggestion
-it's mixed pretty well in my opinion

I'm no expert, i still have work to do on my own beats, but these where just things i notice, hope it helped :-)
and if you get the chance i'd like your opinion on my beat, thanks : https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-i-succeed-fail-all-feedback-returned-463632/
 
NeimanTyler said:
I like the sound of the reverbed chords...im not a fan of where the track ended up...the mix could be better...like the highhat pattern, strip it to the chords and hats and build again in another direction and see where you get...good job, keep grinding.

return feedback here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...boys*-prod-@neimantyler-100%-feedback-463012/
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Ay brotha! I went to ur link& the video said it was removed by user. So I'm gonna check out ur soundcloud and go from there.
 
@NeimanTyler

I checked out a couple of ur sounds. I came across Action! & it's a hot beat.
Postive
-from the beginning to 30sec in it's really got a smooth trap feel.
-Those vibes you used are sick& when those orchestra stabs play along with it. It builds some nice anticipation.
-The Whistle is nice, but is almost a shadow in the track. I'd like to hear it a little more thoughout.
-Same with this faint sound at 2:00 in the background that's nice but once again it's kinda hiding in the track.
-At 4:30 the orchestra stabs sound real nice by themselves and leave me waiting for more, so why not put that at 2:30& move the part at 2:30 to 4:30.

Not so Positive
-:30 you might play with with a phaser or do some kind of sweep on that bassy synth to give it a better transition. I wasn't feelin it all by itself even for that one sec.
-Not really feeling the high pitched synth you used in the hook. The screech is cool tho!
-The drums thoughout could be hittin more like in ur Bang track.

I kno your probably thinking damn.. This is too much, but honestly you got a lot of nice things going on in this beat. With just a few minor adjustments I feel as if this beat could go from something ur trying to get joe blo off the internet buy, from trying to get this into Rovan Manuel's hands so Chief Keef can get on this. Really like what you got going on. Also that track Bang is tight too. Keep comin wit it. I'll be keeping in touch.
 
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