The only thing I would do if I was you is loop the part from 15 secs to 18 secs and only use that part at 19 to 21 right before the chorus. The two just clash in my opinion. Good work though you definitely got the mike will vibe down. Check my thread its right under yours and let me know what you think of my stuff.
Nice beat, if I could do one thing to this I would put the crash/openhat (whatever it is) on the 4th bar instead of the 3rd where the snare is. and maybe add something to make it sound a little fuller, maybe a low sounding pad in the background, but these are small complaints, I really like it, keep at it. Check my post https://www.futureproducers.com/for...at-you-think-ill-check-you-out-aswell-471677/