Cheers for the feedback by the by man!
I really dig this summertime rap, super tight work on this. Really reminded me of Flight School era Wiz Khalifa, especially with the beat's swells.
As far as improvement goes, I'd say that the vocal is solid as is. I'd just be inclined to take the beat up a notch and bring in a little more ear candy and maybe a distinct catchy riff to run alongside you. Right now, the track is a great chilled track, but, like, if you take your average Weeknd track as an example, the music's still minimal, but it's got that catchiness that keeps you hooked and rakes in the fangirls. Basically, you need to get your beat sounding rad as a standalone track. For example, this is one of my favourite beats:
But yeah, I love the vocal. The beat just needs to get on the same level.