Evaluate my current "bryson tiller" sound please

[D-toks]

Hey FP family,

Can you please tell me which of my current two versions of my "bryson tiller sound" has a better sound: the first has less saturation, the second has more saturation that is parallel processed. Also, can you let me know where I should go from here (i.e. are there any frequencies I need to boost, cut, or any thing that sounds like it's missing here)? Shout out to the homie soulful for spotting the beat. Thanks.

D-voks 1:
https://soundcloud.com/d-toks/d-voks-for-been-that-way/s-ZQjw1

D-voks 2:
https://soundcloud.com/d-toks/d-voks-for-been-that-way-more-saturation/s-jbsYZ

Original Song by B-tiller:
https://soundcloud.com/brysontiller/bryson-tiller-been-that-way

 

[DenzelAy]

I'm not sure how to help you make it better, but I like the first one better.

 

[D-toks]

Thanks Denzel. Any particular reason you like the first one better? And do you feel the first sound could suffice as a good enough sound for trap songs?