Start - flute with 808 combo is really dope. It's my inspiration for the future so thanks for that.
0:28 - cool plucked synth and fine melody and move from normal to lowered pitch.
About 1:40 - the rise - good work, creates big tension that makes a listener want to be resolved.
Generally I think you make a good and lot of work and my thought is that this track sounds to have 5-6 sections and each of them could be a separate track. So I think maybe there should be one more element in the arrangement that would be common for all of them.
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