from the first second i can tell you it's better than my first d&b attempt for the drums alone lol...that being said it gets very busy at 11 seconds in and sounds very cluttered, think it's that synth sound. Like the chops of the breaks you've layered over your drums though. at 0.47 there's way too much fighting for my attention and I think you need to work on the mix.
take your time dude.. if you really love what you do.. just do it and you will become a master.
you need to be patient.
its nice.. but you need to maintain your goals here.
Realy chill sounds, I like that. Think u better than me so I have not anything to say about it. I listening it for 5th time, nice . I would practice with compressors, thx.