Hello! I took at a look at your mixdown and touched up a bunch of things, mainly EQing and dynamics/reverb.
Here's a master of the changes I made, so you can compare.
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• I think the vocals sit fine, but you definitely could make them a db or two louder, and coat them with a warm hall-type reverb.
•I found that the kick drum had a lot too much weight in the 30-70hz range, so I lowered these freqs down by about -4db. I boosted the top end to give it more spark and make it sound brighter and to help glue the vocals a bit better. I also dissected out some resonating freqs in the 300-600 range. (Here's a SS of what the EQ curve looks like)
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• I added some harmonic excitement to add some crisp and brightness to the top end, mainly the vocals and the piano, synths, percussion, and fx.
• I would recommend adding some reverb, I used a dark, noiser modulated-type reverb with a 4 sec delay and a low cut at 350hz on the mix to add some depth and ambience to the percussion (mainly that beautiful clap/snare/perc you have on the 2nd and 4th beat), it really adds some polish to the mix and I honestly don't think you can go without it in this style of mixdown you have going.
• I also used some multi-band compression to control the dynamics and strengthen and accentuate the beautiful top end you have on the mixdown (you really did do a great job).
• Second to last I added a multi-band stereo imager to set the low end (below 120hz) in mono, widened the low-mids a bit, tightened up the mids a tad and widened the treble/top end a tad as well.
•Finally I added a limiter (I know, I know, the loudness war... but it does not mean you should ditch the bandwagon and not make your tracks as loud as current commercial tracks, because loud-ness is something that an average listener will notice, and people will wonder why it's quiet.) ---and lowered the threshold of the limiter until the peak of the kick was being limited, to glue the mix and make it commercially loud, while keeping the great dynamics of the mixdown.
Hopefully this helps!
Cheers