So I think this beat could be insane w a few tweaks.
I love the overall vibe and concept and the main melody but......
1. You already know what’s up w that tag. In the words of my OGS dont put anything out that isn’t ready. Don’t tarnish your brand like that. Get that tag right. As a producer the only way people remember us is that damn tag! “if metro don’t trust you.....” “yo Pierre....” etc. the unmixed low quality tag isn’t how you want to be remembered haha
2. There’s a random off beat click that hits twice and doesn’t fit. It’s not on beat nor does it help move the track along percussion wise it actually sticks out to my ear as wrongly placed.
3. A few more elements need to be added a counter melody and more rhythmic percs to kinda carry a lil consistency thru the track. Like I like the sections where you dropped some elements out to create a low point in the beat which was nice, but I felt it was missing a counter melody there and some fx to add that added spice the beat is missing from a repetitive standpoint a bridge would also fix that!
4. Also something about that kick feels off. When it first hits at 25 secs it’s fine. But that second hit sounds funny like there are two midi notes layered and one is slightly delayed making it sound off. I can’t exactly figure it out but I’ve listened like 3 times trynna figure it out haha
Also personally I wouldn’t listen to too much glosik says dude doesn’t like ANYTHING on this website. He’s a tough critic. I loved the detuned melody
I just dropped a beat paying homage to my fav 90 tv show of all time “Martin” would love your feedback
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